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I am holed up in this sadness
I've been spoilt and I've been pampered
I've been cushioned with my pleasure
My emotions now are dampered
I was greedy I was selfish
I was scared to tell the truth
now I pay for my indulgence
and I'm scared to face the proof
Part of a poem that I wrote when I was very distressed. I'm fine now, and feel almost back to normal ~ ^w^ :heart:

It was long and messy so I changed a word in that piece and copy pasted the sucker. XD Hope you like it, I kind of enjoy how the words flow c:

Please comment and tell me what you think! And the poem did change with my mood, the end of it (that isn't on here) was much more relaxed and pleasant.
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Terrajaide's avatar
Wow, I like it! :D